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Part 12: All Is Lost


“Doxim.. so nice to see you again…” said Anne, not bothering to keep the contempt from her voice. This wasn’t suposed to happen, and it was all her fault. If she hadn’t tripped, her and Gary would be well on their way by now. Numb crept up her good leg (her other leg was already slightly numb) and she nearly joined Gary on the floor. “Leave us alone, Doxim. And you too, Mauxin!” She knew it sounded really lame, but that was all she had at the moment. Mauxin stepped forward. “Miss Arctic, that is one thing we won’t be doing.”  He reached over with his long arm and clipped her on the side of the head just so that everything went black.


Gary awoke half an hour later in a cell- a little nicer than the one he’d been in before. Anne wasn’t there and Gary was afraid of what Mauxin might have done to her. “Mauxin…” he called out. “I don’t know if you can hear me, but don’t do anything to harm Anne-er, Aunt Arctic! You’ll live to regret it if you do!”

Doxim watched the screen beside Mauxin. Gary was going nuts. Ever since he awoke, he’d been nuts. He’d also been trying to ram the door open for 15 minutes. Mauxin turned to face Doxim. “Where’d you put her, anyway?” Doxim smiled. “In the interrogation room. She was escorted by two of your best polar bears, so there’s no way she will get away again.” Mauxin’s smile made Doxim lose his. “For your sake, I hope so, Doxim.”

12 Comments leave one →
  1. wurburt45348 permalink
    January 8, 2009 3:20 pm

    doxim gonna die, but even worse, i have to wait for part 13 😦

  2. January 8, 2009 3:59 pm

    🙂 I’m not saying a word.

  3. wurburt45348 permalink
    January 8, 2009 6:56 pm

    lol u just said 5. “a” shouldnt be considered a word, its not long enough…

  4. January 9, 2009 11:33 am

    🙂 I stand corrected.

  5. wurburt45348 permalink
    January 9, 2009 3:18 pm

    lol, why are you standing, im sitting

  6. wurburt45348 permalink
    January 9, 2009 3:18 pm

    thats the way the lazies roll

  7. January 9, 2009 4:23 pm

    Oh no!
    Very dripping story! I was so much on the edge of my seat I nearly fell off! (^o^) (laughing)

  8. frog143 permalink
    February 22, 2009 8:07 am

    part 13- wurburt used his missiles irresponsibly (see outrageous claims) and blew every one up. THE END

  9. frog143 permalink
    February 22, 2009 8:08 am

    once again-wur
    dont ask why im on dis account

  10. February 23, 2009 2:54 pm


  11. December 10, 2010 6:20 am

    im tired to read but awseme

  12. coolping3551 of2008 permalink
    July 31, 2011 10:59 pm

    heres how it ends. tje polar bears kill all qmd polar bears take over

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